The Talking, Walking Apple

By Harriet Murray-Hundley

Inspired By Georgie Murray-Hundley

As Barney the red apple oppened his eyes for the first time he

looked around and saw that he was high above the ground. He 

wriggled around and he suddenley dropped with a big Thud!

Then something really, Really bright shone down on him then an 

apple next to him said it was the sun, and thats when Barney 

decided he needed to learn more about this place that he was 

living on.

Barney started wondering off but then he heard a weird sound  

so he turned around thinking that it was a sign from nature  

telling him to go a different way. He heard it again so instead of  

turning around he yelled "HELLO" scared to look he slowly 

circled himself around and you wouldn't guess what he saw. It  

  was a Big, Fluffy, Orange beast staring at him from 

behind a bush.

He started running at the fastest his small, apple legs could run.

 Then he came to a Really quick stop...

... There was a hill a super big hill, to barney it seemed Bigger 

than the world! But oh no Barneys' foot was biggining to Slip.

With a big tumble Barney kept rolling and rolling untill he hit the 

bottom of the hill with a Crash.

When Barney looked around he saw that the orange beast 

was gone, then he looked around again and saw he was in a 

garden full of red apples like him and pear trees. Then he 

saw a sign that said something like -F-R-U-I-T-O-P-I-A-.

Out of no-where came a clonking sound. It was a Human!

The human was trying to open a gate latch. It came into 

Fruitopia and almost Stood on barney! 

The human looked down and said " Miss, Miss look what I 

found" Miss came over to see and congratulated  him " Well done 

toby, that apple is perfect. When we get inside i will chop it up  

so everybody in fruitopia club gets to try it." Toby picked Barney 

up and rubbed him against his jumper before putting Barney in a

bucket. As Toby walked he spun the bucket around and that 

gave  Barney a headache.