Deticated To: My Family Who Made This Trip Memorable.


Zoom! The marvelous newly polished train of carts seemed to jump at me, like arrows were being shot. At once I felt a surge of anxiety.
"What about that ride?" My mother asked.
"Uh, sure I guess..." I pondered anxiously
“Ok, let’s go then!” My mother shrieked. She yanked me along towards the malicious coaster. Steve (my step-dad) and my sister (Abby) followed.
As we hiked up to the vicious Phantom I heard ear-piercing screams of the other children. I heard the snaps of the carts at the tip top of the Phantom’s Revenge.


"Those rides are colossal!" My mom whispered to me.
"You can say that again, ready Osh?" Asked my sister with an excited look.
"Yup, ready as I'll ever be." My voice cracked

"Looks like we will only be here for a second, the line is so short!" My mom looked like she was so excited that she was going to explode.

As i slid into the red cushioned seat of the ride, the worker pulled a cold metal chain over me and pulled it tight to keep me in the seat. There was also a seat-belt to put on before the ride started too. I pushed the seat-belt until I heard that satisfying click. The ride had now been starting.

"I'll be ok!" I told myself.
The Phantom's Revenge started going up hill at a steep angle. I had serious dejavu from a while ago hearing the clicks and snaps of the ride going up hill. Except one thing was different this time; I was now on the ride.

I felt the breeze of the wind. I almost lost my self in the pine smelling air that was about to pull me out of conscience. I was snapped back to reality when I had a peek at how high up I was.

I remembered a time when I was little because of how high up I was. The flashback took me to back when I was at my favorite playground at home. I was on the steepest part of the slide at the playground anywhere there. I was afraid to go down the monstrous slide. Though that was then and this is now.

We were about to fall now. As the pressure rose inside of me, the ride stopped. It had stopped. Just as we were about to fall. But little did I know the ride had stopped in a pleasant way. Not in my mind though.


"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

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